Start your novel – opportunity for writers, free event

crabby boss womanHaving trouble starting your novel? Well, help’s on the way.

EVESHAM FESTIVAL OF WORDS SAT. 9TH DEC,  10.30 am – 3.30 pm

Come along to Evesham and hear writers read and talk about their books. AND join me (Tom Bryson) for a half hour mini workshop “Getting started on your novel” (2.00 pm). Forget your fear of the blank page, the overwhelming horror of the task ahead of writing some 80,000words. Learn a simple way to build your story and have the confidence to start – and finish it.

Where? Almonry Museum and Heritage Centre, Evesham . Meet authors and poets for advice and chat, talks , readings and mini-workshops – and check out books – crime, thrillers, westerns, regency, children, family drama.

https://eveshamfestivalofwords.org/programme/

“Getting started on your novel” with Tom Bryson 2.00pm – 2.30pm

“Planner” or “Pantser”? What’s your preference?

Something to aim at, a blank sheet of paper, or a bit of both?

There’s no one right way – find what works for you

COME ALONG – YOU’RE WELCOME

 

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WRITERS – WHO’S YOUR BOSS?

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WRITER – MUSE OR BOSS?

“Please! Don’t yell at me. I’m a writer. I await my muse!”

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ways to track your writing progress

For many writers, keeping track of progress and improving productivity are big headaches.

Advice from the writing ‘gurus’ often comes down to a choice between options 1 and 2 below.

1 Time Trackers.

There are many apps to choose from and download but essentially they amount to traditional ‘clocking in’ and ‘clocking out’. More sophisticated tools enable you to show your scheduled time against actual time spent on different projects or tasks. Client billing is available if you run a business and visual aids like pie charts can help you to see the proportion of time spent on different activities.

TIP:  CUT BACK ON SOCIAL MEDIA TIME AND ADMIN.  SPEND MORE TIME WRITING AND MARKETING (SELLING YOUR BOOKS).

2 Word Count.

For many writers, word count is often the preferred choice. 500 words a day, 1000 for the fast, perhaps even more for the “Usain Bolts” of this world. Show your progress using a graph or a calendar pinned to a wall or board right in front of your eyes. No hiding place!

TIP: DON’T SET YOURSELF UP TO FAIL. START LOW THEN CHALLENGE YOURSELF

3 Hybrid.

This is my preferred approach. I appreciate this will not be for everyone but it works for me. I write novels and I think, especially for fiction, it is necessary to adapt your method of checking progress according to what stage you’re at. For example, writing your first draft is basically about getting words on paper (screen). This is the stage where quantity matters – quality comes later as you rewrite and edit. So yes, I use word count and target 1000 words a day when writing my first draft. However, at the same time I track time spent (fact is I do this for every stage) – and set a target schedule of time each day. Keeping track of my ‘bum on seat’ time is important for me. This is particularly true for those stages in writing a novel where word count is not the main goal. For example the planning, rewriting and editing stages require a focus on quality and attention to detail – no mad rushing here, just getting it right. But putting in the hours is important.

So, that’s my approach – always track your actual writing time; make sure you work your scheduled daily hours. Drive yourself at the first draft writing stage, let your creative juices flow but get your raw material down on the page as fast as possible. Put your critic’s head in place for the later stages.

TIP:  DO A HALF HOUR REVIEW OF YOUR PROGRESS AT THE END OF THE WEEK. PLAN NEXT WEEK.

How do you check your productivity, keep your writing on track? Be really interested to hear. Thanks,

Tom

 

 

 

 

 

How to get started on your first novel

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Tuesday, October 24, 2017

5:02 PM

How to get started on your first novel

‘I’d love to write a novel but I just don’t know how to start’. A friend said that to me recently and it got me thinking – how can I set out some advice that will get aspiring writers over that very first hurdle? Past the dreaded blank page.

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On your marks, get set…

Well, here goes – but please remember there is NO ONE RIGHT WAY. Everyone has to find what works for them. And this approach is what works for me.

Let’s get started.

As you go through the stages below, fill in the ‘blanks’ at the end.

Go!

Think of a main character through whose eyes you will tell the story. Now write a brief bio about that character. Name, age, gender, job, strengths, weaknesses – basic stuff first, you can flesh out the details later.

What’s their problem? Have they been hit by a major crisis? Family, friend, job, natural disaster, accident, etc. Or is the problem getting something they desperately want – or need – there is a difference. Is it ambition, love, money, revenge, food to survive…

What’s stopping them achieving their goal? An enemy, their own shortcomings or fears? Lack of expertise or knowledge? What’s at stake if they fail – make it high. Write that obstacle and the consequences of failure in a sentence. 

What options do they have to achieve their goals. Are they high, medium or low risk? Look again at your main character – what choice would they make. (If this isn’t in their nature, or the way you want your story to go think again and revise your main character profile).

Next, write about your main character’s antagonist (enemy).

Name, age, gender, job, strengths, weaknesses – basic stuff first, you can flesh out the details later.

What are the antagonist’s goals, needs or wants – the obstacles to them achieving their goals.

Now you should have the bare bones of your novel.

What about setting. Decide where your story will play out. The city, a rural location, in your world or someplace exotic. Consider how much research you might have to do to make the ‘place’ credible.

As your main character (aka protagonist, hero, ) deals with achieving their goal, overcoming obstacles, they will meet opposition, setbacks, hurdles. Think of their first hurdle – now set them up to fail! Yes, you need to make your main character’s journey as tough and challenging as possible. That’s the essence of conflict – and without conflict you story is dead in the water. The conflict can be external or in your character’s head.

However, the main character need not go into the dragon’s den without help. Throw in an  ally (a sidekick). This character may also be a love interest – or you may prefer a separate character in that role. Through these major characters, you can show your main character coping – or not – with adversity, pressure, the ‘dark hours of the soul’.

And finally, after a tough journey and plenty of kickings along the way they come out the other end – with what result?. Goals achieved, needs or wants satisfied – or still in trouble?

Get an idea now about the cataclysmic moment – the climax or big, big scene when the final battle is fought and won – or lost. Having this in mind at the outset, gives you as the writer a goal – an end in sight that will resolve your main character’s journey.

Now – copy and save this section and fill in the blanks! Use the characters you’ve created.

  • [MAIN CHARACTER’S NAME – WRITE HERE]

faces a big problem which is…

  • [MAIN CHARACTER’S DILEMMA, PROBLEM, OBSTACLE TO GOAL, NEED OR WANT – WRITE HERE].

MC’s attempts to beat the first obstacle by…

  • [DOING WHAT- WRITE HERE].

This doesn’t work and in a further setback…

  • [WHICH IS – WRITE HERE] ends up in an even bigger mess.

This series of…

  • [CHALLENGES AND MIXED SUCCESS AND FAILURE – BRAIN STORM A FEW – YOU CAN CHANGE THEM LATER – WRITE HERE] leads to a final…
  • [CLIMAX AND CONFRONTATION – WRITE HERE ].

The MC comes through this…

  • [DEAD OR ALIVE, HAPPY OR IN DESPAIR, GROWN AS A PERSON, BEATEN – HOW DO WANT YOUR STORY TO END?  WRITE HERE].

By now you should have an outline of your novel – so let the hard work begin. Turn that into a full-length novel.

You’re off!

As you write your novel you may like to look at some of my previous blogs about writing that will give further tips and suggestions. Good Luck.

 

Myths and legends

Zepp cover BCBugleTurning facts into legend

Myths and Legends

Myth

A traditional story about heroes or supernatural beings, often attempting to explain the origins of natural phenomena or aspects of human behaviour

Legend

A story that has been passed down for generations, especially one that is presented as history but is unlikely to be true

So is my story of “The Zeppelin of Kinver Edge” a myth or a legend – or an approximation of the truth. We hear a lot these days about “Fake Stories” – but how much of what we read as history is in fact true?

Henry Ford once said “History is more or less bunk.” (Bunk or bunkum meaning nonsense). Isn’t it the case that history is written from thenry ford history is bunkhe viewpoint of the writer which may well be biased in a certain direction? Is historical “truth” an objective that can never be realised? Is the Bible or the Koran “true”?

When I wrote “The Zeppelin of Kinver Edge”, I based it on a small historical snippet that I heard mentioned when I moved into the village about ten years ago.

“They say a zeppelin airship landed on Kinver Edge during the Great War – World War I.”

That morsel intrigued me. So I did a bit of research and discovered that the West Midlands of England suffered airship bombing raids in 1916 – and one airship hit engine trouble. Then I asked myself the mouth-watering question all writers should ask all the time when dreaming up a story.

WHAT IF…?

That question led me to consider the plight of young Harry Foley and ask “What if, early one morning in 1916, he looked up towards Kinver Edge and there it was – a Zeppelin airship?” So Harry followed his curiosity and the rest – as they say – is history! Or legend? Or myth? Or bunkum?

Anyway – it’s a great little read – with pictures! .

To sample or buy print or ebook click here 

 

I’ve been retired ! Well, not me but my website theme…so new look.

Welcome to my new website/blog look – for whatever reason WordPress decided to retire the previous theme. Never mind – I do think that theme was getting jaded; probably a bit too grim looking as well.

I’ve also now managed to get a ‘comments’ box set up after each post. So – no excuses – what do you think of my ‘new suit’? Does the blank page in the banner pic above resonate with you writers out there? I want to pick up the pen in the shot and start scribbling on the pad … get productive. That’s precisely what my last post was about – raising our productivity levels. Have a look at the ideas in there; what do you think? Please pass on your tips to ‘get the writing done’. We can all learn from each other.

By the way below was my previous banner pic – possibly somewhat too much in your face…

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